Sucky Flower

this isn't bad but could be better with some work but you probably know that. first thing you'll want to remember is that leaves have stems they don't just connect midway directly to the flower stem. and for a more realistic feel try connecting the leaves to the center of the flower stem it will create the impression of roundness. if you get what I'm talking about. kinda like the leaf on my drawing here: [link]

also where the stem connects to the flower you might try rounding it just slightly not sure I can explain what I mean
[link] this is what I mean; you see where the stem connects to the flower there's a slight roundness. that will intimate weight to the viewer.

what else let's see.

it looks like you did this with pen, that's tricky because it's sometimes hard to get certain pens to color evenly but one thing you can do is try coloring in the same direction without deviating that should reduce the amount of uneven sketchy lines.

the flower itself: when drawing flowers it's important to remember that the petals generally connect directly to the center. and not necessarily to each other although I guess they can overlap but if you're going to do that you'll need more practice. you also might want to try drawing either four or six petals that way its more equal and you don't end up with an awkward extra petal. man this is hard to explain without examples.

one last thing to take into account is that the center or eye is really little seedlings so when you draw you might want to implement little dots or circles for a more realistic look. here's a quick two minute drawing I fostered up in da muro just doing the little things I mentioned above [link]

anyway I don't know if you really needed this advice or if this was just some quick little drawing you did in five minutes but you shared it on that art feature so I thought maybe you wanted some comments.